April is the national poetry writing month and I just found that out and about NaPoWriMo as well.I know I’m VERY late for this but this is my attempt at joining in the fun. 

Drags you by the legs to the depths

Of agony,crush


Breakable,everything bleed-able

Shall bleed,extracts

Precious life and leaves

One a chew

Feeling drained of all goodness,feeling


Why cannot we

Fall in love with Gods that

Make no mistakes and does not hurt

Hearts that love them and forgive

Mortal sins?Why is it so

That one must hurt

To the point that every limb aches

And every muscle ails? Why

Does it leave you broken

And perhaps even

Irremediable? Why

Do you bleed when everything

Is about convenience these days,when you know

There is no point?

True love sells out to convenience it seems

It is indeed

A commercial world today.


4 Comments on “Repentance”

  1. dsnake1 says:

    indeed, a very commercial world today.

    ah, NaPoWriMo 2011. better late than never, and there’s always next year. I have completed this edition, 30 poems in 30 days. :)

  2. Jingle says:

    it is over, you can write a poem a day, get used to it…

    join next year.

    Thanks for linking ti poetry potluck.

    fabulous word flow.

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